too many commas I hate

September 2, 2013 § Leave a comment

All today is tears that do not fall, and hurt eyes. Pain learnt and learnt and learnt and sown so deep and true, no movement may be without it and even each movement is made because of it, the synapse sparking, the brain messaging out, and sent by it.

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